Hesitant Sentences Corrected

I think schools should stop making kids come so early in the morning.

Teenagers need more sleep compared to adults. Having these young adults come to school so early in the morning isn't beneficial for their learning. In fact, students should start classes later in the morning to ensure a goodnights sleep.

I think it would be cool if the Olympics were held in NJ.

If the Olympics were held in NJ it would help boost the economy. There would be more jobs available for the events and many more opportunities in advertising.

It’s my feeling that people should be nicer to each other.

If people were nicer to each other the world would be more productive and respectful. This way there would be no arguments at work that could slow down production time. Also, road rage related accidents could be cut in half.

I believe everyone should have first-aid training.

First-aid training should be provided in high schools throughout the country. Knowing simple skills such as CPR could save a life.

I feel like companies should stop testing cosmetics on animals.

Companies need to stop testing any type of cosmetics out on animals. Animals are innocent creatures who do not have a say in what is getting placed on them. They are forced against their own will and could be considered abuse and mistreatment.